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Slow
26 December, 2002
Author: Sax

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I'm so alone...

You're so far away right now,
yet right now you've never been so close to my heart as you are now.

All I have to see you're beatifull face,
is computer printout of a group photo you were in.
That made you shed tears,
wasn't it?

I can't tell you enough how much you mean me,
how much I love you as friend.

I can't tell you how much I long to see you,
to be able to hug and hold you.

I can't you how glad I'll be to see you,
I might end up kissing you,
which I don't see as a bad thing!

You're the one that saved me so long ago,
for that you've fish hooked my heart,
you're my dearest and closest friend,
you'll be the one I turn to confide in,
but only if,
only if you let me.

My dearest friend,
I can only begin to tell you how much our friendship means to me,
I can only begin to express how much you mean to me.

I only hope you let me.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.36.186.75) -- Sunday, January 19 2003, 07:14 pm


that was a nice poem... a wonderful poem. i liked it a lot. leaving that last line alone was a nice touch.
 
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