Times Change
2 December, 2003
Author: Seizure
(Co-authored by: Stacey)
Cold will kill flowers, light will leave from sight
All beauty fades, days will turn to night
Everybody fails, yet some still succeed
Nothing lasts forever, everyone can bleed
All will face some loss, everyone breaks down
People lose their way, kings all lose their crown
People face regret, many more still die
Life's purpose will leave, so why even try?
Times will always change, nothing stays the same
Flowers tend to grow, with a little rain
When you think you're fine, something knocks you down
A loved one makes you smile, smiles become frowns
People talk about you, when you're not around
Listen to the darkness, silence is the sound
Glass will only shatter, splintering your skin
Nothing really matters, you can never win
Tears will always dry, hiding all the pain
Scars are there forever, this world is insane
Take a step forward, only to fall back
Why can't anyone, cut some fucking slack?
People need much help, most never receive
Others frown upon, those that tend to grieve
Life is full of pain, no one knows your name
It will stay the same, look what we became
------- Author's Notes -------
This poem was written 50% by me, and 50% by Stacey. It sounds similar in style because we worked so closely on it. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Leah06 (24.5.241.141) -- Thursday, December 4 2003, 02:50 am I know i read this yesterday but i still have to comment. This poem is awsome! I told Josh that already but stacy you need to be told to! GREAT POEM! Leah Kendall |
| Terrie* (65.148.230.121) -- Thursday, December 4 2003, 07:08 pm this was an excellent piece...truth deeply spoken...you both did an amazing job....i truely loved it...i hope you both have a beautiful day!!! Terrie* |
| KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Monday, December 8 2003, 01:12 am I liked it Seizure and Stacey. Very well written and I would love to do something in the future with you Seizure, again I'm sorry for the confusion, but I'm also glad because then I might not of read this..Beautiful you guys, great job... |
| Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 09:40 pm Thanks for the comments. I really enjoyed working on this with Seiz. It was definitely a challenge to try and mirror his unique writing style. I think it turned out pretty good though. Seiz, Thanks :) |
| Seizure (65.80.81.6) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 11:17 pm It was a fun experience. Stacey just picked up the ball and ran with it. I was impressed. Thanks for the kind words 06, Terrie, and KitKatrina. And Katrina, just hit me up when you want to do one. You have my contact information. |
| LilyBelle714 (64.12.96.233) -- Sunday, December 21 2003, 07:35 am Tonight is my first time visiting this site - I have enjoyed it very much. After visiting the forums I went to check out some of the poetry of some of those of you who seemed to be most vocal and I have to say that you all seem like a really nice, talented bunch. I enjoyed this poem particularly. I just think it was such a neat idea to work collectively on one poem. |
| Leah (204.112.162.3) -- Saturday, January 3 2004, 12:02 pm This poem made my eyes water!...The lines are so true but the part about not even tryin' made me cry because soemtimes I feel like I don't want to try just give up on life its true no one will remember me not my family or friends when I'm gone...so many times i look around me and think what is the point! if i were gone it would make no difference......I'm already in my own little rut so why try.... |
| KJP (67.112.79.23) -- Saturday, January 31 2004, 08:57 am I really like this poem it really has a lot of meaning. I love the fact that you guys worked together on this one. It shows friendship and friendship is built on tust. God job Stacey & Seizure! |
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