Straight'n'simple by Seizure

This has been the hardest, thing for me to say
I've thought about it all, every single day
I'm stuck in a life, I don't want to live
I've said it before, but you must forgive
I will spell it out, for all of you out there
Because there are some, that have claimed to care
My time is sinking, like the sands of time
Don't look up to me, I am not sublime

You all should hate me, look at what I've done
I have pushed away, each and everyone
Why would I do that? Why can't I give in?
Why do I dwell on, the Hell that my life's been?
I'm stupid, I'm shy, I just want to die
I want to know why I ran my life dry
I want to go out and drown in the sea
You think you've lived hard, good thing you're not me

Martin Vann (171.75.206.165) -- Friday, November 14 2003, 02:58 pm

Good Way To Balance Your Life, Read Seizure's Poems
Seiz,

I like this work, gives me a point of view as I consider my own life, gives me balance and makes me feel quite good about my life. You may not be happy, yet, you don't wine like a baby about it, you tell it the way you see, I can handle that. If, there is any comfort in knowing that your work is reviewed, then, you can rest at ease at least, on that one point of your life.

Very Good Work,

MartinV

Ash (65.73.59.233) -- Friday, November 14 2003, 08:54 pm

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This title really caught my eye. Its good and directly to the point just like the poem. I agree with Martin V. Your work is fantastic and don't think that we should all hate you and not everyone "pretends" to care.

Terrie* (65.148.212.191) -- Wednesday, November 19 2003, 02:40 am

tugged at my heart....
Seize, as you know...I love ALL your poems. this one tugged at my heart......your poems draw so much meaning into many lifes. i thought i appreciated life...but....i have learned to really appreciate life in a higher degree thru your poetry..remember. you touch so many lives with your poetry...a given gift.......along w/others...I CARE....Terrie*

Seizure (65.80.81.6) -- Saturday, November 22 2003, 11:01 pm

V, Ash, & Terrie
Martin, I appreciate your comments like always. It does make me feel a bit better, thanks. You're one of the few I hold in high regard (same with you Ash and Terrie), and I wanted to point that out on my next writing... thanks again.

When I wrote this poem, I didn't really see what you three got out of it until you said it. Now I can see your point and I'm glad I did this. You three brightened up my day a bit.

Leah06 (24.5.241.141) -- Monday, November 24 2003, 04:48 am

i disagree...
Yea, this poem is amazingly great. But i disagree, you are not stupid! All though you push me away, i will always come back just like a rubber band, one you strech the space between its sides, they are bound to come back. Great poem!

Leah

Ash (65.73.59.237) -- Monday, November 24 2003, 10:09 pm

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I hope i could brighten you up a little bit. Hey, every little bit helps.

KJP (67.112.79.23) -- Saturday, January 31 2004, 08:48 am

......
Sometimes at one time or another we all hate our lives but there is no way you can hate yours all the time. You get so many people that write how much they care about you, how much your work really makes an impact on their lives. That has to make you feel good knowing that you have touched many peoples' lives. I know I would. You really make a differece.

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