Destiny
29 June, 2003
Author: Seizure
Why should I get pissed? Why hurt anymore?
Why pick up the pieces? I've been here before
Parents pay their bills, children play their games
Killers steal lives, victims lose their names
It is all the same, it will never change
Someone's done it first, now it's not so strange
Life begins to bore, nothing to explore
It's been done before, why live anymore?
Do not stray the path, you're told how to live
Or else its a crime, no one will forgive
No one understands, you come out as rude
Right things to do, don't pay for bills and food
Yeah you commit crime, what else can you do?
No one on this Earth, knows what you've been through
But they judge you now, you've never been on top
They stick you in your arm, your heart begins to stop
There's one thing I have learned, in this life of pain
Only those on top, have something to gain
People like me now, will never be missed
So I'm writing this, to simply exist
When my time is gone, I hope I touched someone
I'll never have a wife, I'll never have a son
I'm tired of this, I know what's meant for me
To live is to die, it is my destiny
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Terrie (65.150.174.144) -- Thursday, July 3 2003, 02:50 am wow!!!i see a rap song in this...excellent work seiz keep up the good work....it is of the real world...i liked it. i'm beyond my years... but... i do have a son and i listen to some of the rap that "he allows me to hear"...:D |
| jen (205.188.209.46) -- Thursday, July 3 2003, 04:37 am that's awesome sometimes i feel the sameway. |
| Pamela (194.125.158.64) -- Friday, July 4 2003, 08:14 pm Interesting poem Seizure, I atttached myself to the line "life begins to bore, nothing to explore...." I feel that way so strongly sometimes that I also ask myself if there is any reason to even live anymore. And, even though I am sure you don't want to hear this, I'll say it anyways-there is one thing that you can do in life that nobody else has done. And that is to stop caring what everybpdy else thinks, or what everybody else does and just live your life day by day without comparing it to other peoples. Ignorance is bliss in the right situation. Anyways, I liked the poem, it made me feel very strongly on the subject of boredom and wrestlessness within this life :o) |
| barb (66.46.230.247) -- Saturday, July 5 2003, 03:14 am Oh Seizure wish I could make you feel differently. Too me life isn't boring ,it's full of surprises. Just when I think everything is going smoothly, wham something in life changes good or bad changes but it's never boring .I want to stick around and see what surprises I get.I do understand what you are saying though.I have days where I'm sick of the bull too.Hang in there Seizure It can't get any worse and if it can just be thank-ful it's not that bad |
| Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Saturday, July 5 2003, 10:50 am Terrie, the way i see it, any poem can be a rap song... or any kind of song for that matter. That is actually what lyrics are.. poems said to music as far as I'm concerned... Jen, thanks for the comment, it was much appreciated. Pamela, it's been a while since we last talked. I'm glad you checked out my latest and could relate to some of it. i also appreciated the words of encouragement there. Barb, been a while from you too... nice to see you as well :). While we disagree on the topic, at least you can see my perspective on it. Such is the essence of artistic vision I suppose. Thanks for the comment. |
| LinzAy (205.188.209.40) -- Monday, July 7 2003, 02:03 am Trust me Seiz. You've touched someone, a bunch if ppl...im sure of it. You make me smile everytime i talk to you. Even if ur not in the happiest of moods i smile just knowin ur ok. And im sure plenty of smile smile bc of you....thats touchin someone. We love ya Seiz.....and life will be better.....:D |
| Ash (24.97.207.68) -- Monday, July 7 2003, 11:20 pm I'm sure u have touched many people with your words. I often feel the way you do but am unable to express it in such a beautiful way. You're amazing! btw the wife thing can be taken care of i'm single...lol...j/k... |
| Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Monday, July 7 2003, 11:38 pm LinzAy, I will now call you Smiley. I'm just kidding, don't want to associate you with the guy that threatened to kill me before. I'm sure you remember that... it happened here. I'll be honest and say you're the first person I know of that said I make them smile all the time. That's nice to know. Ash, I'm growing to greatly appreciate your comments. Are you hitting on me girl? ;) I'm just messing... I appreciate it a lot you two. |
| Ash (65.73.59.238) -- Monday, July 14 2003, 11:35 pm Seiz u r amazing and yes damn straight i am hitting on you! lol |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, July 15 2003, 07:51 pm UR MY HERO! LOL. Great poem! |
| Seizure (67.34.132.63) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 02:26 pm I'm being both hit on and I'm a hero... what more could a guy ask for? |
| Ash (65.73.59.235) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 04:56 pm i wish happiness for you seiz. If i was religious in any way shape or form which i'm not but anyway if i was i would totally pray for your happiness. so since i'm not a prayer i'll think real hard 4 u to be happy. lol i don't know what the hell i'm talkin about but hey u r being hit on hint hint hit back.lol |
| Jessica (66.134.137.229) -- Wednesday, July 23 2003, 07:06 pm That was very moving and full of emotion. Most people are scared to share there feelings now, but you put them all out there and it was very touching. |
| Seizure (67.34.132.63) -- Wednesday, July 23 2003, 07:06 pm "Ash, *hit back*<br>Jessica, I really appreciate that comment... glad to see you could appreciate it." |
| Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Friday, August 8 2003, 06:11 pm Damn, sounds like my diary...If I had one. <.<; Anyway, neat job. If me word counted for anything, ya got me touched. Great job. Your Fan, CA. :-) |
| Ashley R. (66.53.140.214) -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 03:03 am Seriously Seize, your poems are so good, i get all emotional when i read em. ANd i dont think i am the only one either. |
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