Daddy's Little Girl
30 March, 2003
Author: Seizure
There once was a girl, let's say she had no name
Her parents always bragged and gave her high acclaim
She made straight As in school, she had so many friends
She never caused a thing, that needed amends
She helped the elderly, she volunteered her work
She was so polite, even to a total jerk
It seemed she was perfect, not a thing went wrong
Still she told herself, she did not belong
She started the drugs, to try and go find
Why she really felt, she was so confined
Mom and dad denied it, she was everything
They saw her as a kid, reaching up to cling
On their shirt to play, like all children do
They really didn't, have a single clue
She was now strung out, and with the wrong crowd
To them she was their kid, and she made them proud
She went to her dealer, late one afternoon
She said she had to leave, he said she could leave soon
He threw her to the ground, and raped her on the spot
She said she would tell, and so she got shot
The police found her, tossed out with the trash
She was set ablaze, most of her was ash
Her ID was stolen, her skin started to curl
Who will inform Dad, about his little girl?
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| LinzAy (64.12.96.233) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 10:04 am Aw.....that's really good Seiz!! sad but good! |
| Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Wednesday, May 7 2003, 02:15 am A stunning read! |
| Brandi (152.163.188.164) -- Wednesday, May 7 2003, 02:53 am thats really great!! it totally tells the truth about parent/child relationships. the ending was sad but sometimes reality is. a good piece of writing |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, May 8 2003, 12:22 am This is almost the opposite of me, i dont have straigt A's not even close try a 3.71 to 3.58 in that area and my parents treat me the exact opposite. Great Poem, I love your writing! |
| keila (195.93.49.13) -- Sunday, May 18 2003, 06:06 pm awesome seizure! I love it so much |
| trinity (63.162.80.55) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 11:25 pm that is an excellent poem!! I love the poems that tell bout life from a real person's point of veiw, and yours certainly do that,, keep up the great work... |
| Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Saturday, July 5 2003, 11:04 am You are all trying to make my head swell aren't you? :)... I'm just kidding... It was a true story... just thought you all would want to know. |
| tricia (63.245.181.15) -- Saturday, July 5 2003, 04:29 pm This is an excellent poem, one that discribes true lives experiences and facts. So many parents try to hide themselves from the truth of what their child is doing. |
| Ash (24.97.207.68) -- Monday, July 7 2003, 11:22 pm ...but totally believable. I love your writing but its scary that so much of the stuff you write about is true |
| Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Monday, July 7 2003, 11:33 pm Tricia, I agree with you about the true life experiences depicted in the writing. Ash, I write about the stuff people don't want you to hear. I've had a dark life, so I choose to show everyone what it feels like to live that life. It will never change. Thanks for the comments you two. |
| Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Friday, August 8 2003, 03:18 pm Very nice, how you made that true story come alive, honestly, it nearly brought me to tears. Unfortunately, I haven't cried for the longest time, so I really didn't. But anyway, it was very well written, and great job. Your Big Fan, CA. :-) |
| Bug (205.188.209.112) -- Saturday, September 6 2003, 09:19 pm Your writing has touched my heart. That was my sister it seems. Your talent is proven with each poem, or even comment you've written. |
| Kayla (65.82.201.6) -- Sunday, February 15 2004, 08:22 pm That was wondiful it reminds me of how bad my father would feel if that happened to me! It touched me and my sisters hearts. |
| Morgan Marie (12.219.57.50) -- Tuesday, March 15 2005, 01:29 am sitting here reading this wile helping my friend with homework and that last paragraph shocked me. Great poem Seiz... |
| Kami (4.240.36.15) -- Thursday, January 5 2006, 04:27 am good and never lame |
| mandy steder (205.213.111.50) -- Monday, May 8 2006, 05:33 pm omg i cannot beleive how you can express everything the way you do in your poems. i think you are an amazing writer. do you have anything published in books, because i would buy them all. seriously, you have major tallent and you could go far. i check for you every time i come on the site! keep up the inspiration. >_< by the way, the more you wrtie about the real life, the more you get out the messages about what is really happening. great job. :) |
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