Too High Above
30 April, 2003
Author: Seizure
As I look in your eyes
I begin to see
A different part of you
A new part of me
Something that is special
Something that is new
You know my feelings
You know they are true
I can see our future
As I'm kissing you
Far into our lives
Together it is true
There is not a thing
I would rather do
Than to go to sleep
And wake up beside you
Several years later
Walking down the street
I'm holding you close
Feeling your heart beat
We are both so happy
I want our lives like this
This is quite the chance
I don't want to miss
I just do not see
How love could be wrong
When it is felt
Just so damn strong
We all crave affection
I want to have it too
Do you feel for me
What I feel for you?
------- Author's Notes -------
This poem was contributed on by Ryan |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| LinzAy (64.12.97.11) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 10:14 am So different! Kinda weirds me out Seiz!! lol..naw i'm just playin! I like it a lot. thanks for bringing out a dif writing style in seiz guys...heh heh. Good one:) |
| Seizure (67.33.163.29) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 10:24 am LinzAy, that's because this didn't come out of my creativity. They proposed the idea to me, I just put it into words. The odds of me doing an actual poem on "love" from my heart is very slim. |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.237) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 11:11 am lol....yea.....i figured.....but i bet it would be beautiful! |
| ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 11:00 pm thanks seiz for doing that for us |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, May 8 2003, 12:25 am This is so awsome. I think i know who the girl is and she is so very lucky!This poem is breath taking! I feel this way somtimes but no one feels this way twords me. I wish i had somone like this for me! Great writing!!!! |
| Pamela (194.125.159.27) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 06:53 pm Now, is it just me or did you write a poem about something positive!?!? J/K - just giving you a rough time, I like your usual stuff but this, this made me stop and go back. I read it about ten times and to be honest, I like this glimpse into your romantic side. Even if it wasn't your idea....... |
| Seizure (67.33.163.29) -- Saturday, May 10 2003, 10:54 pm I tend to surprise from time to time. I can write about "other" things... I just don't because I don't feel them. Especially lately. |
| ashley (12.222.12.163) -- Wednesday, May 14 2003, 11:48 pm great poem, even if wasnt from you. i agree with you totally about writing is usually how you feel. like i like to say- you cant order a poem,,it may be good but it wont have the genuine feelings beneathe it. |
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