Ascension -14
30 April, 2003
Author: Seizure
It seems we flew for months, as fast as we could
Still I didn't care, I just felt so good
I had escaped Hell, when no one said I would
How I turned so cruel, no one understood
Still we carried on, as we knew we should
I gave it all I had, I gave it all I could
We went a little further, I started to grow tired
I hope my energy, meets what is required
I needed Heaven, it's what is desired
But I shot myself, it was not acquired
The Jester still pushed on, I still felt inspired
To make it to the end, to see my fate transpire
I am on my way, I start to clear the bite
Of the Hell fire, I have won my fight
We continue to climb, to an all-new height
I know in my heart, all will be alright
There's a crack in the sky, it is glowing bright
I just hold my breath, and go into the light
------- Author's Notes -------
This is the followup to Alleviation. This is also the end of the story, hope you liked it. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 03:38 pm Glad i read it to the end. :) Great story... excellent ending. Thanks! ~ Stacey |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 12:49 am Awsome as always, all you need to do now is make a book! Great poem! |
| Justus Isaiah Richardson (198.81.26.173) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 01:17 am Wow, and not a single dirty word. I liked this one. Justus |
| Roy (152.163.188.40) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 05:19 am You are one of on top 10 most wanted list--frankly fellow let me look---with ****'s above not one line, well "not aquired" to fit in with a very go flow of poetry---and yes "required" would have been duplictated- hell you blew some socks off! yer no tat were actooly gooooooooood and nert a dirty word. <snip> This is no doubt on the front page remarkably wonderful reading---I think I read Leah comment-- HI 06 it was real ! was real!what xiv---fourteen? |
| Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 08:38 am Stacey, I'm glad you liked the story... honestly... I didn't expect many to appreciate it or what I was trying to do with it. What kind of book Leah06? Justus, I tend to shock at times (in regard to the profanity comment). Glad it was decent. Roy, I'm on the most wanted list eh? FBI style probably... Or maybe a hit list? That one would probably fit me too... (to avoid confusion, the above is a joke). Thanks for the kind words. |
| Roy (64.12.97.7) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 01:16 pm Please steer me your own written favorite poem not to worry about profanity on my behalf but more on this poem there isn't a word in the universe to discribe how wonderful it is to me!!!!While I here thank you Dreamer for the extra work you have done to CYA my statement and I will try not to be so defendsive over some dumb comment and you have ways if Seizure doesn't already know. I''lll do my best/much better with anger management---You are funny Seizure---FBI style---ha ha ha---well, like Ernest might say" yeah,you uncovered oo13 and now I am summoned to the president about retainment" (what in the heck does that mean?) |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 08:57 pm I dont know just a book like on your life and then like tell a story from your life and then one of your poems that relates to the event. Just an idea... |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.106) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 05:26 am Great story Seiz!! And great ending!.... |
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