Defloration -9 by Seizure

I know what to do, but lack the strength to try
I am afraid of pain, even though I cannot die
But still I drudge on, I will tempt my fate
To battle against, the one that I hate
The one that kept me here, for several years
I don't give a shit, I've shed all of my tears
I will not back down, I know what to do
I will escape hell, I will make it through

I peek around the rocks, I can see the demon
Threatening a fallen, with injected semen
In order to create, an antichrist one day
This is a price no woman should pay
I will stop the rape, it's time to attack
I swing with all my might, until I heard bone crack
I picked up a rock, and dropped it on his head
I will keep it up, until sure he is dead

The woman disappeared, I heard an evil laugh
The fire in the sky, seemed to shift it's path
Clouds formed to a Jester, his eyes glowed so bright
He said he was impressed, that I won the fight
And my next victim, was the one called Stitches
He said that he's why, my back still itches
He cut up my back, when I wasn't free
Then he cut and took, wings away from me

Seizure (68.155.205.74) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 10:13 am

format issue
In the second stanza... that really long line... it's not formatted properly... the line should end after "pay." I emailed Dreamer so hopefully she'll correct this issue... but incase anyone's wondering why that part is totally "off," that's why.

Roy (152.163.189.168) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 01:11 pm

I think
I get your drift Defender I would have greatly enjoyed it more with injected (say) demon. Other that far out!
Oh what happen to Surreptitious? (no page) and what does that word mean? I looked it up and it is adjective meaning "to seize" surreptitious control. I dun know but I'd like to read it when it comes available tho with my pea brain I may walk around in a daze. Like I said I think I got your drift but now I have to lookup another word..I love it

LinzAy (152.163.189.67) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 03:43 pm

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Lovin the story Seiz!!!!!

luc (68.74.115.8) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 07:32 pm

no title
its good like always...keep up the work o.O

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 11:43 pm

Yea i agree with luc
Yea Sizure like always your poem is Awsome! I knew you should submitt thease (meber when we were talking online....) Yea so great job!

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