My Funeral by Seizure

On the day I'm burried, I get to walk around
To see the world, although I'm in the ground
First thing that I noticed, no one showed respect
At my funeral, I'm such a reject
I go to see what my, friends did on that day
Were they at least sad, that I'm out of the way?
I head to go see Cory, he was my best friend
He's laughing playing Xbox, not caring of my end

Next I go see Jake, he was also close
He has no idea, that I am a ghost
He is eating cake, and watching TV
It seems he also, forgot about me
I go to see Crystal, she was my girlfriend
I want to see her, it's time I want to spend
She is crying softly, I hoped it was for me
But it was her book, that set her tears free

So far no one alive, seems to care I'm dead
So I go see Randa, she is just ahead
She is reading jokes, surfing on the net
I guess I'm one of those, easy to forget
So I go next door, to see my friend Katie
She was studying, something on page 80
So I looked closer, it was for her frat
I wasn't on her mind, I should have figured that

Next up is Margie, Katie's twin sister
Now that I am dead, I really really missed her
She was out with friends, cruising on the road
No one cares I'm dead, I'm ready to explode
I suddenly wake up, it was all a dream
It was never real, no matter how it'd seem
It's my only fear, that I guarantee
That when I finally die, no one will bury me

Ryan Holden (198.30.166.54) -- Tuesday, March 4 2003, 06:59 pm

very very nice
wow! I love this poem...very creative, and deep! Well put together as well, what an aweseom read and write, thank you for sharing.

Stacey aka shadyscreen (68.82.126.206) -- Tuesday, March 4 2003, 08:16 pm

Creativity is a Talent
Guess what Seizure... you didn't disappoint me.
Very creative, definitely well written.
~Stace

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 01:24 am

humm
that was a good poem alot of emotions was poored in this work of art but don't worrie when you die I'm sure everybody will be at your funeral and people will bury you I don't really know you but I'm sure your a good person.

LinzAy (64.12.96.169) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 01:27 am

......
This is very good seizure! :)

barb (206.191.91.237) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 07:19 am

holy
very good seizure. In your dream you didn't see their inward pain. Remember you me everybody hides the pain we feel.

Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Thursday, March 6 2003, 11:05 am

wow
glad you all liked this work... I really really appreciate it... I didn't expect to see so many people take notice to it... thanks again.

Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Thursday, March 6 2003, 11:43 pm

wow!!
A very emotional poem, really quite awesome

Xeracy (204.113.161.187) -- Tuesday, March 11 2003, 04:46 pm

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Excellent work. I'll admit, it made me cry. It makes me wonder who'll notice when I'm gone. Hopefully at least one person, but you'll never know. I don't really want to find out right now though. :)

Martin Vann (63.208.63.204) -- Tuesday, March 11 2003, 05:17 pm

Your body may feed the worrms, but your poems, well...,
Siez,

Your flesh may one day keep the grass green, but your words will forever feed our hearts and that master of our mind and thoughts, the sole. Away you may go, but years and years from now, some stranger will read your words and wonder who you were, how could his words express such vision. He must have been a good person, I see in what he has written.

"I wonder who he was?"

I'm amazed how you can take a peice of barbed wire, drag through the meat of life and like a professional butcher, reveal on the best parts. Your words cut deep and true, we will remember you!

MartinV

Seizure (65.164.72.2) -- Tuesday, March 11 2003, 09:50 pm

thanks
Capricorn, always nice to see your comments there.

Xeracy, I'm sure the dreamersreality community would miss you just fine though. You deliver some execellent work.

Martin, been a while since I've seen some of your comments. Glad you enjoyed this writing and I appreciate the encouraging words. Your analogy was also creative... I enjoyed it and see your point very clearly.

barb (66.46.230.162) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 05:47 am

chopped liver
Hey seizure what am I chopped liver heeee no thank-you for me good writing, even if you don't aknowledge me Ha Ha just giving you a hard time. my specialty Heee

CrYsTaL (206.214.69.53) -- Sunday, April 13 2003, 11:57 pm

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real cool poem seizure, liked the way you showed everyone you thought cared on how they really thought different, once again cool poem

nicole (67.31.178.189) -- Tuesday, August 12 2003, 08:16 am

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wow you really know how to write---i love writing poems and your good--keep it up

Ashley R. (66.52.64.17) -- Wednesday, October 22 2003, 07:06 pm

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Seizure,
Dont think that when ur gone, nobody will miss you. You have ur friends, girlfriend, and the people that read ur poems here. And dont forget bout ur family. But u have a life ahead of u, live it to the fullest

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