Drivel -4 by Seizure

I've died and gone to Heaven, now I'm at the gate
There's a long line, I guess I have to wait
Days begin to pass, now it is my turn
Now to the gatekeeper, I will have to learn
If I've earned the right, for eternal bliss
Or if I fucked up, and started to miss
The right path in life, and went so astray
I did not believe, it's too late to pray

I'm up to the gate, he said I lived in sin
I have tried my best, I just could not win
He said that my anger, got the best of me
And so my soul, will now never be free
I dropped to my knees, I could not believe it
What kind of God, would allow this shit?
I said I could not know, don't hold it against me
I was trapped in pain, I had to be free

He said it's too late now, he said I can't be saved
It was my choices, with which this path was paved
I'll be cast to Hell, to serve eternal flame
I turned toward my guide, that knew my full name
He stepped out of the light, and smiled wickedly
His eyes were glowing red, what's to become of me?
He spoke with such a voice, that tore at my skin
Life is just a game, not everyone can win

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 05:39 pm

very good poem
I love the way your poem flows

Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 06:13 pm

Lasohnda...
Glad you liked the way my poem, "flows." Guess you didn't care too much for the subject matter.

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Saturday, March 1 2003, 04:49 am

hey smile
I like your poem or I would not comment .I'm sorry It's a good topic ,good poem your a good poet,person some people can't flow on there poems thats a good thing ,smile

Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Saturday, March 1 2003, 09:19 am

Lasohnda...
Okay, got it... thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed it. Sorry for the miscommunication.

tate-nicole (195.93.49.13) -- Monday, March 3 2003, 10:00 pm

wow
i come on to this site to see if youve added any new poems as im in the love with the way you write. i would be honoured if you would email me at bostonstr4ngl3r@aol.com i would love it if you could seizure, thank you

luv,
tate

LinzAy (64.12.96.138) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 02:33 am

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Awesome poem Seizure. Being denied gods love and entry to heaven...hard subject to write about and not expect some heavy comments...but you put it through as your judgement day so it makes sens....and about to fall.....to the depths of hell....how it must hurt!

Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Thursday, March 6 2003, 11:03 am

sorry...
Tate-nicole, I didn't see your post until today. An email is headed your way.

LinzAy, can't wait for you to see the story unfold even more.

Leah (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 02:50 am

WOW
WOW!!!! I myself write poetry alot but your poems are great! I have only read like 5 of them so far but i will finish reading them all. Your a wonderful poet and i am glad you have the abulity to show people your work. You give me courage to poast my own. But i am still too scared. I would also like you to e-mail me at FHSgurlie06@netscape.net Thanks for your great poetry!

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