What Have You Done? by Seizure

I can't wait to get home, to be with my girlfriend
We both always cherish, the time that we spend
Together holding on, in a tight embrace
Nothing in the world, could make us replace
The other for another, this will never be
We're meant for each other, I think she would agree
For her I'd give it all, and she knows it too
This is happiness, shared by very few

If this is my future, I wouldn't change a thing
She is who I want, as I buy her ring
I'll ask her to marry, I think she will say yes
My feelings for her, I just can't supress
I whistle as I, walk outside the mall
This took all my money, for her I'd give it all
I have no regrets, as I drive back now
I will get there as, fast as time allows

I finally made here, I stepped inside the house
I think she'll agree, to become my spouse
I went through the house, and knocked on her door
Then I opened it up, as I've done before
I found her on her bed, laying ever still
With an empty bottle, she swallowed every pill
I embraced her head, it has now begun
Why did this happen? My god what have you done

LinzAy (152.163.201.191) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 01:04 am

......
O....i dont know what to say.......beautiful,sweet, then sad......

Luc (68.74.144.97) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 04:07 am

linzay pretty much sumed it up there. beautiful, sweet and then sad. i like the poem it was just that. the begining was sweet. the ending was sad. but the whole thing was just beautiful.

capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 05:20 pm

True?
A heart-touching poem, so beautifully written.Happy at the start then a twist of fate such a sad end. Hope it's not true!

Coma (152.163.189.233) -- Thursday, February 6 2003, 11:02 pm

Did it again
Man seizure you make me sick everypoem gets better and better, I dont know how you do it.

Seizure (68.154.9.85) -- Friday, February 7 2003, 01:09 am

beauty...
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. The fact this work has brought that out in all of you is something special (in my eyes). I'm really glad for that... even though I make some people sick :).

Martin Vann (67.75.182.28) -- Friday, February 7 2003, 07:28 pm

I agree with COMA, you make me sick!...,
I wish I could be that sick and throw-up words the way you do. Ah, I feel better now, must be your work, like some form of solelish, medication?

Thanks Seiz,
Martin V.
I'm sure YOU are probably, the only one that knows this is not an insult.

anonymous (208.254.109.22) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 06:31 pm

no title
aaww... this is such a sweet poem even though the ending is really sad. i hope that this really didn't happen to you! you are a true poet w/ an edge. great work.

Ashley R. (66.52.64.17) -- Wednesday, October 22 2003, 07:16 pm

Sorry
Sorry bout ur girlfriend, i could tell that u loved her so much. But i bet if she knew that u were giong to propose, she wouldn't have swallowed the pills. but i dont know what was going through her mind. Sorry

carl (4.65.238.101) -- Wednesday, December 22 2004, 06:24 pm

wow
i thought you have a great mind and i was wondering did it really happen?aw i loved it like i do all your other work great job!

alicia (75.36.16.223) -- Monday, July 27 2009, 10:58 pm

wow
that was good

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