What I Want To Hear
3 February, 2003
Author: Seizure
My life is so dark
It dims every day
I try to talk to people
They don't know what to say
I don't even know
What I want to hear
But I haven't heard it
What will keep me here?
| Tweet |
Comments on this poem/writing:
| LinzAy (152.163.201.191) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 01:00 am Wow....siezure. Short and good..... |
| Martin Vann (65.57.57.95) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 07:33 pm Simple to answer, its your poetic pen. Martin Vann |
| unknown (165.247.97.80) -- Thursday, February 6 2003, 12:53 am I LOVE YOUR POEM BECAUSE IT IS SO REALISTIC AND SO TRUE. |
| Seizure (68.154.9.85) -- Friday, February 7 2003, 01:04 am Yeah, it was a short one... but don't think I half assed it, it said everything I needed it to. Thanks for the comments... |
| barb (216.129.37.250) -- Friday, February 7 2003, 05:38 am You said what you felt and that's what matters. Sometimes you get your point across better with less. The saying " less is more" fits here seisure good writing. |
| Ashley R. (66.52.64.17) -- Wednesday, October 22 2003, 07:18 pm I think this is one of the shortest poems i have read of urs. But like Barb, you got ur point across. And it is very clear. |
| |
Click here to read other Poems by Seizure
Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack
COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved. No part of this website, including all pictures and written words, may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without permission of the original author of the work. All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner. All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com so the proper person may be notified.