Loser
27 January, 2003
Author: Seizure
I am so hopeless, but as you all know
I don't give a damn, where my life will go
I make the dumbest choices of anyone
Maybe my parents, were cursed having a son
They really needed, to treat me how they did
So that I would die, as a lonely kid
And not be dangerous, when I got a brain
I know that I am, just another strain
On today's world, on today's youth
Nothing in me is good, don't hide from the truth
It seems like yesterday, I was having fun
With a few new friends, but I had to run
And keep a promise, to another friend
Doing him a favor. He did not attend
He had changed his mind, to do other things
I felt like a puppet, that hasn't cut it's strings
So now here I am, in my own lament
No one is around me, but I need to vent
As things go so wrong, as I am pulled down
In the current events, I think I will drown
I know people use me, but what can I do?
Everyone has friends, well, I need some too
So I guess I will just, spend my whole life
Pleasing everybody, including a future wife
Yeah that goes against, all that I have preached
But when you're so lonely, extremes are soon reached
Just call me a sell out, see how much I care
Lonliness is one thing, far too strong to bear
Yes, I know that my, life's now for the user
Why the hell have I, become such a loser?.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| luc (68.74.120.35) -- Friday, January 31 2003, 04:34 pm not a loser... like ya said 'but when you're so lonely extremes are soon reached" nice poem man... :) |
| Seizure (68.155.232.81) -- Friday, January 31 2003, 11:50 pm Hey everyone, look at how mad smooth I am. I managed to put a period after a question mark... go ahead, look... last line in the poem... I'm just that smooth. Also, look at my mad typing ability and how I spelled, "loneliness." I didn't put an "e" in there. Damn I'm smooth. |
| LinzAy (205.188.209.71) -- Saturday, February 1 2003, 12:20 am Mad smooth seizure! hehe....loved the poem/song? though. Really good......kinda surprised me with the future wife thing in there......doesnt seem like something you'd say but the lines after it cover it up. Love it Seizure..... |
| Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Saturday, February 1 2003, 09:17 am Haha, so LinzAy thought Seizure was about to sell out :). Loser is not a song, it's just a poem (at least for now :)). |
| Pamela (199.216.176.5) -- Saturday, February 1 2003, 05:34 pm You really made me contemplate desperation in this poem. There's an unrgency, like some underlying tone in your words that strikes me strongly in this one. And to agree with Luc, that line "but when you're lonely extremes are soon reached" So true. Been there as a matter of fact. Period of my life where I didn't have a friend in the world. Betchya I could give you some advice though. You ask and I'll give :O) Wicked poem. |
| Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Sunday, February 2 2003, 09:15 am Pamela, you hit it right on the head. All I'm doing right now is giving a few more "standard" Seizure poems or people to read and enjoy before everything changes. Monday I'm submitting 3 more "standard" Seizure poems to Dreamer, but after that... it's all going to be different... all of it |
| LinzAy (152.163.201.69) -- Monday, February 3 2003, 09:07 am Hehe...sellout! naw...im only playin!! u know it too!! hehe......wow, so what do you mean everythings gonna change? how so? |
| Seizure (65.164.72.2) -- Monday, February 3 2003, 05:49 pm You'll find out LinzAy... in about 7 days from now... I'm submitting my 3 other poems to Dreamer when I get back from college. I don't know how many people will approve of the new material, but it is 20 poems long... |
| LinzAy (152.163.201.191) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 01:34 am o...ok:) |
| Morgan (63.162.80.70) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 01:10 am I love all your poems, they are the best, they explain how life is to me, and that not every one has a fine and dandy life!! keep it up! |
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