Please
9 June, 2002
Author: Seizure
Look over here, what do you see?
You know where I'm standing, but you don't see me
It doesn't really matter, that's why I hide
All of my pain, that's bottled up inside
I feel you don't care, I feel your hate
I don't understand, why it is my fate
To be discarded, fast by everyone
Now I walk alone, my back is to the sun
There is one that will, listen to my plea
She will be the one, that does not agree
With all that they said, she is so sincere
I think that she knows, I hope to disappear
Away from situations, away from this place
I can't stand knowing, that I'm a disgrace
I deserve their hate, and all their ill will
Let me pop another, large and bright orange pill
I went to my mom, because she was strong
I said that I needed, a place to belong
But she said something, I'd never expect
She said she though I was, a definate reject
She told me to leave, and never come back
This sudden surprise, felt like a heart attack
She picked up my chain, then removed my key
Mom you're all I have, please do not leave me
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| barb (216.129.37.250) -- Friday, August 30 2002, 05:39 am when I read this I could feel the pain, brought tears to my eyes. That's how I know If writings are good. they make you emotional. very good Seizure |
| Pamela (66.38.146.34) -- Saturday, August 31 2002, 12:26 am Again you have managed to make me sit and contemplate the loyalty of those we entrust our hearts too. It does me good to come back off my cloud and back to reality every once and awhile. They say that all emotional strife begins within the family - it seems exceptionally so in your case. And that to me, is a tragedy. |
| Sax (207.166.205.16) -- Saturday, September 21 2002, 06:14 am I hate the fact that we lose everyone and everything we love in the end.... But then again some people we deserve to lose... But other times, those that really truely help us, we end up loseing, and we find ourselves crushed, destroyed, and left for dead or something close to it.... I feel like the little devil man saying all this, yaknow, the Angel-Good Devil-Evil consiounce thing.... HA! But alot of times its usually better just being dead cause thats where you'll end up in the end, dead. And there prolley isnt really an afterlife, prolley, not saying there is or isnt, cause there may be, but then again there may not be.... Who really freaking knows????? Ah well..... |
| somebody (211.26.112.59) -- Thursday, November 21 2002, 01:55 pm no mum, no dad,brother,nephew,aunty,grandparents. Death it just sneaked up so quietly and took them one by one and left me with no-one that cared or that i could trust......ahhhhh mental torment aint it grand. |
| Leah (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 03:54 am wowo! that is soooooo sad! |
| LinzAy (205.188.209.73) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 10:58 am What a poem! Choked me up...couldn't imagine denying a child security or hope or love or advice. Couldn't. |
| Ashley (204.80.173.101) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 08:38 pm That was a very good poem |
| Loïe (24.86.84.164) -- Monday, May 19 2003, 04:06 am This is amazing. And by amazing I don't mean it's the best poem I've ever read, but it just has so much emotion in it. I can relate so much to the way you put emotion in your poems. It brought tears to my eyes. |
| o my god (152.163.253.35) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 05:38 am this poem is sooooo touchin i really like the way u express yourself this is beautiful n sad |
| Seizure (67.34.132.63) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 02:35 pm didn't expect this one to get all these comments... kinda confused by Loïe's comment though. "by amazing I don't mean it's the best poem I've ever read" was unnecessary, I'm pretty sure that was a given. Thanks everyone. |
| Kathleen (64.166.125.87) -- Friday, January 23 2004, 04:08 am I know how it feels. A lot of the time I am bagged on by my parents. I know what it's like to be shunned... |
| crystal (208.254.109.28) -- Friday, February 20 2004, 07:24 pm very good poem...i dont know what else to put( im still speachless)!! |
| crystal (208.254.109.20) -- Friday, February 20 2004, 07:24 pm very good poem...i dont know what else to put( im still speachless)!! |
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