My Perfect Place by Seizure

Laying around one day, right there next to you
I guess I slipped away, I saw the world anew
I just can't explain, exactly how good it felt
The more I experienced, the more my heart would melt
I was walking alone, along a golden river
When all of a sudden, my limbs began to shiver
I fell to the ground, the bullet hollowed my head
Now it's time to see, what happens when you're dead

I heard a voice speak out, it said I must ascend
To my perfect place, a fate I cannot bend
I thought I might regret it, but I said "okay"
Then the voice reached down, and carried me away
Next thing that I knew, I'm carried down a hall
I am so confused, why I do not fall
I'm not being held, what's going on isn't clear
But where ever I'm going, seems like it is near

I'm told that I am here, as I reach a door
I am told that happiness, is sitting on the floor
Now it's time to see, what's my perfect place
So I open it up, and I see your face
You told me it's time, we can be together
And that all the good things, now can last forever
All of my memories, that have caused me pain
Are now lost in time, like tears in the rain

Andy (65.217.39.68) -- Thursday, February 21 2002, 06:05 am

He does listen
God would never turn his back on you, he loves you very much. Sometimes the answers to our questions are not answered right away, but you should not think that he does not care. I lost my father-in-law to suicide last year, and it has been so hard to move on. My husband fights daily with the pain. Think about everyone else who will be effected by your decision, there are people out there who love you very much. God is the only one who can sit you free from all pain, just let him into your heart. When it is your time to go you will get to see that wonderful place called heaven, but for now try to deal with the trials on earth. God died for you to, he hears your prayers and will answer them when the time is right. GOD LOVES YOU.

Barbara (216.129.37.250) -- Tuesday, August 13 2002, 05:49 am

like it
Seizure you have a good imagination and a good way with words . keep it up have you thought about writing your story , your feelings, your experiences.

Evil Eyes (152.163.253.97) -- Thursday, June 19 2003, 07:19 pm

I FEEL YOU
I wonder if there is that perfect place. That was a really good poem and i was really feeling you on it. I really really related to it. Seizure, if you ever need to talk to someone who has had these exact same emotions and feelings then i'm here just email me. <snipped-sent>I have also been through alot of shit like you seem to have so i would really like to talk to someone to who is feeling the same way you know. well if you can email me back ok.

Ashley R (66.53.132.243) -- Tuesday, December 16 2003, 02:45 am

Seizure
This poem is sad, but sweet at the same time. Great job!

brandi (205.188.116.10) -- Tuesday, April 6 2004, 04:16 am

wow
wow it had a really neat twist at the end...it was sweet; not your usual seizure writing. its different and i like it. i thought it was really sweet how you wrote that your perfect place was her. touching..good job

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