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Light Of Darkness
15 November, 2003
Author: Shan

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How could you spark this light of darkness
Releasing all these fears of mine
That hide the tears of a waisted time
Through all the years behind my mind
Finally find a track to make
And you bring out all I've slacked to take
The ring is back that I could not break
A bleeding crack of every mistake
To much to try to hide every scar
Causes pain to touch the side where they are
Subside the strain and push it far
I've cried my rain to every star
I was locked and content for years to long
All feelings blocked, couldn't be bent, I was strong
But you had to bring my light of darkness along
And fight to show me hiding it all in was wrong
Finally facing all the hurt I hold
Silently tracing all the dirt I mold
The pains erasing the setting I've told
As I'm letting my light of darkness unfold

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Silkened Moon (206.216.222.93) -- Tuesday, November 18 2003, 02:10 am

Nice one Shan!

Wow Shan! I can't believe how well you came up with such a poem, what was your inspiration? This one was so neat, I loved it all the way! Great job Shan!
 
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