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Perfect Time To Cry
22 May, 2003
Author: Shan

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Just another perfect time to cry
for the girl forcing a smile apon her face
Just another tequilla sunrise
for a girl who can not drink
Just another lazy day
for a recovering girl to miss
Just another loser guy
to add on to her list
Why can't life just take a break
from everything she wants to avoid
>From everything she has to do
and from everything that she must take
It's just another perfect time to cry
For the girl forcing a smile apon her face

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Becky (207.75.133.169) -- Wednesday, June 25 2003, 05:15 pm

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Nice poem
Sara (24.147.243.252) -- Thursday, June 26 2003, 04:17 am

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I really like that.
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Tuesday, July 1 2003, 08:50 pm

Nice

Lmao!! It reminds me of the exact problem Imma goin' thru! Isn't that wierd?? Well, I agree, it's another perfect time to cry, a'cause, I've been doin' that alot, and that's why I like this poem so much. It's just like me. Good job, and hope to see more!! :)
 
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