Sky Eyes by Shan

I sat on the house and watched the sun go down
there was nothing but golden red in the sky around the town
The red turned to purple as the last drop disapeared
And as fast as the sun went, so did everything I feared
The first star came out shortly after the golden sun fell
The sky had become a black holed wishing well
I wished to live in that world where all I can see
is the bright golden sunrises that seem to intrigue me
Where all fear disapears and everything is golden
Where people can go to release stress and feel hole again
There is such a place, and to me it is here
Up on my house watching the sun rise and disapear
It seems that I enter a different world of my own
One where I seem to set my own tone
It's where I can release and feel one with the world
A place where everything is golden and my problems become unfurled
That's one way to tell that things will be alright,
No matter what the problems are, the sun will rise at dawn and fall at night
The sun never fails to shine it's bright rays
And remind us that we can make it through these days.
I sat on my house today and watched the sun rise
There was nothing but a golden red in the sky's eyes

Jana (209.87.248.56) -- Friday, September 27 2002, 02:08 am

Love it.
I love ur peom. With your permission can I use it in a song ( I'm not famous but I really love the peom)?? I'll change it if u'd like,or not use it at all.

shan (152.163.188.225) -- Sunday, September 29 2002, 02:59 am

wow
hey jana. i'd be delighted to have you use my poem as a song. just as long as i can hear it. and if ya get famous off of it, keep me in mind ;-) haha jk. but i would like to hear it. thanks for readin through.

jessi (66.66.4.38) -- Friday, January 3 2003, 01:19 am

thats an amazing poem shan. and your right. no matter what the problems are the sun will rise at dawn and fall at night. putting it that way makes me feel like my world isnt going to end with a few difficulties.

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 11:59 pm

stars
I live in seattle were the don't seem to shine alot the stars are my faviort part of the skie so I went out to the store and bout glow in the dark stars and hanged them on every ich of my wall so when I go to bed I can look at the stars and just think I also bought a 70 doller warm blanket that has stars moon and the sun on and its blue and yellow

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