Sense Of Reality
29 July, 2002
Author: Shan
The fan blows hot air in from outside,
my eyes wonder in thought,
but that's no surprise.
My foot is shaking,
like it does all the time,
especially when I'm thinking,
like when I'm writing this rhyme.
Not sure what to write of,
yet thoughts are flowing like crazy.
Although there are so many,
all the thoughts are hazy.
Look around at the new place I call home.
Think about the past places and let my mind roam.
I've come so far with myself
and done good with what I've been dealt.
Think I've done good with my choices
and occasionally the way that I've felt.
This is a new chapter in my life i must face.
Finally I feel like I am in the right place.
This is a start to something I've always longed for.
A sense of reality, that I've never had before
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| LinzAy (152.163.188.163) -- Monday, March 24 2003, 07:32 am I like this a lot, i know the feeling in the beginning of the poem and also the end of it......two whole different feelings put into one poem here for me. Good work! |
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