I Can Let Go by Shan

Your poem made sense, and so I did cry
But this time, didn't stop to think why.
Although I've been deserted by my own blood
and everywhere I turn, my life takes a thud,
I know it could one day be good
If I only listen to my heart like I know I should.
You're right about the biggest mistake a person could make
being the constant fear of making a mistake
But it's so hard to lean on myself like you say
When I'm just not sure, I'll make it though the day
Sometimes I wonder if I really am in control,
cuz it feels as though the fears gut my soul.
If I do finally let go, will everything be ok?
Will the fear of life finally go away?
I try so hard to be the person I dream of,
A person full of happiness, desire and love.
But at the same time, my life is not mine
Controled by some other force of time.
I wish I could lean on myself like you,
To help me with tough times to get through
I know that one day, I will succeed
And bloom as a person instead of being this enclosed seed.
I will be ok, just as long as I try
Til then I put my words in poems to get by
Thank you for reading and responding back,
For you have set my mind on a different track.

silla (67.192.131.67) -- Saturday, August 24 2002, 10:44 am

hey i now what u are going throu i am there right now i love this guy he is my x boyfriend and he mean the world to me but no he is going out wthis b***h and he has a babbygirl also and i was trying to get back w him after he got out of jail and yah

anonymous (152.163.188.198) -- Wednesday, September 18 2002, 11:45 pm

this was about a guy?? wow lol

Kim Diane Norman (216.215.128.92) -- Friday, November 15 2002, 04:54 am

Good
I love this poem it made me cry.Not many people can wirte good poems but this one is so good.

Lindsay (64.12.96.79) -- Tuesday, September 30 2003, 03:42 am

In my mind
hey that was a really good poem, i can relate all the way. I loved this guy and we were going to get married and we had promise rings, but i became a b***h and treated him like s**t and now i want him back but he is with another girl...hopefuly they want last and i can show him that i have changed but after 3 times of doing the samething who can blame him...will i hope that you are better and keep writen, because alot of people are right there with you.
Love
~Lindsay~

jasmine (69.34.121.94) -- Saturday, March 13 2004, 09:57 pm

left behind
there is a guy I went with and we kelp breaking up.so one day we stop going together and he went with my step cousin and i want him back and he want me but am scare to call and ask he to take me back and my step cousin beged him to take her back but he don't want her he want me.he said if I ask him he will go with me but I'm very scared that I will get hurt again.what should I do.

star1 (206.77.0.156) -- Sunday, September 12 2004, 03:22 pm

so real
Iknow what you are going through Because Iam in love with this girl and he did me the same way.

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