Mixed Colors by Shan

I put the brush on the page and disapear into myself.
Each stroke with new colors, symbolizes a release.
A release of a thought, it clears up my mind,
like a traveling ship, I disapear into the moment of time.

The black is for all the pain,
all the suffering I've dealt with.
The blue is the hope of what
I wish for my dreams and myself.

The red is for all the blood I've shed,
and all the death I've seen.
The yellow is the light that wont shine through.
The orange is the blood and the light that has mixed.

No erasers with paint,
it is what it is, it can't just be fixed.
So what I have got to do is mix all the colors,
mold them into something beautiful, something worthy.
Maybe the final meshed beautiful creation
will evenutally symbolize myself as the portrait I dream of.

kathleen (166.61.226.253) -- Monday, January 6 2003, 03:56 pm

good job
i like this poem....i can really relate to the speaker, excellent imagery

anonymous (81.111.134.213) -- Friday, September 26 2003, 07:14 pm

no title
not bad

Pamela (66.38.146.173) -- Friday, September 26 2003, 11:22 pm

Neat
I think this poem is neat because of your imaginative approach. Good job Shan! :o)

anonymous (12.237.229.52) -- Thursday, October 16 2003, 12:41 am

no title
this person must be under stress....not bad though

dalia dakhil (131.191.18.225) -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 02:59 am

lovely tittle
I love the way you discribe the colors you have painted it cechis may attention.

Faisal Dakhil (131.191.18.225) -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 03:03 am

I love the tittle it is very cetchy for the readers.
the poem was so good it was part of my homework and my teacher loved it aswell as my class.Thank you for the poem you posted.

fish yut (69.242.90.54) -- Wednesday, June 2 2010, 08:19 pm

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do not get it

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