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Heartbroken
2 August, 2003
Author: Shana

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I don't know how exactly everything happened
But what i do know is i fell for you
And i fell for you hard
Now everything is over and done with
And i don't even know where to turn
At first i thought i was gonna be okay without you
But I'm not I'm stressing just to know i can't have you
I guess i messed up or maybe we both did
Probably too late to turn back
And fix the heartbreak
I'm heart broken I'm not even going to front
But i guess that's what happens
When you start off a relationship
Unsure of what you really feel
I was unsure and really didn't
Now how to tell you that i wasn't sure
But as i spent all that time with you
Constantly talking to you
I started falling but was in denial
When you felt for Florida
I gave in and truely knew how i felt
But there isn't nothing i could do now
But realize how i MESSED UP

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Comments on this poem/writing:

nikki (62.30.238.166) -- Monday, September 15 2003, 11:42 pm

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i like the way this poem uses casual language it's the sorta thing u can relate to rather than all this soppy, descriptive stuff. fab.
Emma (205.188.209.72) -- Thursday, October 2 2003, 12:47 pm

understanding

I really like the poem i can relate to it cause right now i am going through it. Didn't know wut to do but now i do and regret not knowing from the beggining.
187Edgar187 (24.205.7.68) -- Friday, October 3 2003, 01:12 am

Life goes on.

Nice poem, well written....but remember life goes on, cant be heartbroken forever..
pretty (68.46.131.60) -- Wednesday, October 22 2003, 11:11 pm

Feel u

this poem is very nice
brandy (65.6.103.206) -- Thursday, September 2 2004, 02:25 am

hey!!

ur poem is great i am dealing with that now
 
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