vinebar

Adios For Ever
29 March, 2004
Author: Sweet Sara

vinebar

I have always wondered "why you?"
Beeing with you after what u did and still do
I was never able to say good-bye
Now I can't stand your huge lie

You knew how to control me mentally
And not a single time did u feel guilty
It was you who I always admired
But it was another who u desired

You used me for my hour-glass body
To show me off at every party
You thought you would always be holding my hip
I'm sorry to say that you lost your grip

I finally say my fare-well
Call me sometime from your place at hell
How could you ever had said you loved me like crazy
When you laid with the girl living next to me

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.117.16) -- Friday, April 2 2004, 07:17 pm

Adios Amigos! (hahhaha)

You know I just had to comment! Because your poems are so real!! You write about things that happen in everyday life!! I know how it feels to be stuck to someone who treated you like dirt. Inspite of all the lies, all the hurt, and pain that they've caused on your life; you finally realize, "Hey, what am I doing?" "I should've left them a long time ago!"

Good job for taking a stand!! I commend you!!

Have fun Sweet Sara!

Meridian
Sara (216.39.188.57) -- Tuesday, April 6 2004, 12:45 am

thx a lot

hey!!! just wanna thank u it was hard but hes in da past so...wutever...forget him n look at the bright side! i got a date for this friday yey LOL im happy now but thx
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Sweet Sara

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.