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Necessity
24 March, 2004
Author: Sweet Sara

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I need you like the air I breath
I need you like the sky needs the stars
I need you like winter needs cold
I need you like fish does water

You're not just my destiny
You're my necesity
I love you

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Meridian (205.188.116.207) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 03:22 am

Loving this one

SweetSara, Necessity is the best!!!!!!! Great usage of similies; comparing your love to nature is just amazing!
Keep up the beautiful poems SweetSara!
Have fun now!!!!!!
Meridian (205.188.116.207) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 03:42 am

Hey SS!

SweetSara, just wanted to elaborate on the above comment when I said "comparing your love to nature is just amazing"! I mean comparing the man who makes you feel this way, and comparing his love to nature!
Sweet poem again! LOL!
sara (216.39.188.215) -- Sunday, March 28 2004, 04:37 am

np

thx for everything elaborate all u want! lol thx again for ur comment on this poem
 
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