To The Friend I Love
17 December, 2003
Author: SweetVenom
When there's no one around,
When I have nothing to do,
but for lying on the tall grass;
I think of you.
When someone walks away from me,
When someone pulls me closer,
When someone draws their hand on my shoulder,
I couldn't help but thinking of you.
When I look straight into the sea,
With wild winds roaring around my ears,
I couldn't hear anyone call me,
But I turn around to look for you,
‘Cause I thought you called me.
I can't stop thinking about you.
When the evening sun gleams,
like an orange ball of fire,
I see your face in it,
With clouds of hair blocking the view.
I can't hold on any more,
But to accept that I miss you.
you are a true friend,
As you have made me realize,
A friend like you should never be lost,
but should be shut tight in heart.
I think a lot about you.
My friend you are the one I love.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Shorty (209.84.125.94) -- Monday, December 22 2003, 12:39 am I really like your poem. If this really happened, what happened to your friend? |
| sweetvenom (61.2.224.41) -- Wednesday, December 24 2003, 04:18 pm This is the feeling I get when I think of my old friends who are away and its been a long time since I had met them.So this is an emotional arrangement of words.Nothing much. |
| venkat (210.214.131.186) -- Friday, January 9 2004, 03:52 pm ok not bad try to improve more |
| shyam (202.88.170.40) -- Friday, January 9 2004, 04:06 pm i think u mentioned abt me in this poem |
| sweetvenom (61.1.201.70) -- Saturday, January 10 2004, 04:24 am You are definitely one among the plp. |
| LinzAy (65.35.22.28) -- Saturday, January 10 2004, 05:03 am Aw! |
| Alberta Unmey Yezerta (61.1.201.113) -- Saturday, January 10 2004, 06:19 pm THTOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!... AWESOME :P |
| sakthi (61.1.207.98) -- Tuesday, January 13 2004, 07:02 pm i donno how u get the emotion filled words like this. u spoke out my feelings i suppose |
| Himanshu (10.224.2.206) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 04:21 am That is awesome... really good!!! |
| Terrie* (65.135.86.184) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 05:17 am friends are indeed great to have..some stay and remain longer than most relationships.. FRIENDS ARE DIEHARD.they are our past/present and future..they can relate to the feelings of the heart..they have been there to see you thru every crisis ..every good/bad ...they are ALWAYS honest in what they speak...i know cause i have one whom i never lost...great read.. |
| Sweetvenom (192.168.58.73) -- Wednesday, July 14 2004, 02:55 pm Thanks a lot. And Terrie, I do agree with you on friends but when you really lose such people you are really don't know where you are heading. Life really becomes tough. We should never lose them. |
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