I Feel You by Terrie*

I feel you,
...at the slight of a breeze
...when i close my eyes
...in the words that you spoke

I feel you,
...in the warm suns embrace
...in the wetness of the falling rain
...in the blossoms that bloom
...in the leaves that fall to the ground

I feel you,
...in the beauty of a rose
...in the fragrance it bears
...in the soft rose petals touch

I feel you,
even in your absence...
in the happy tears that I shed...
when i'm thinking of you ...

I feel you,
whisper in the wind,
Good night sweetheart...I Love You...
deep In My Heart

Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 10:14 pm

Terrie
You have such a way with words Terrie, and a heart of gold. :) Beautiful poem

Silkened Moon (204.31.225.89) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 10:15 pm

Nice one Ter!
I loved this one Terrie, it had such sweetness and some sort of innocence to it. I'm Speechless! I can't Believe how fine of a writing this is! Very good job! I loved it!

Terrie* (65.148.213.109) -- Saturday, December 13 2003, 07:27 pm

Stac 'n Silkened Moon.
i can not begin to tell ya what it means to have 2 great poets comment on ....my... writing, i am very highly touched..wow!! like so honored..thank you..for your time and comments..have a blessed day..Terrie*

Ems (152.163.252.227) -- Sunday, December 14 2003, 05:05 am

:)
i loved it...i can really relate to it like when u love someone sooo much it just seems like they are everywhere! good good!
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Tarna (66.72.30.161) -- Sunday, December 14 2003, 07:19 am

I understand
How you can feel love in the life around you even when it has passed the physical reality to the spiritual side of being. The love is always alive long as you take the time to remember. Wonderful writing Terrie. It touches my heart..

anonymous (208.254.109.28) -- Wednesday, December 17 2003, 09:48 pm

aww
really touching poem, i feel like that at times. you did a good job writing this poem

Terrie* (65.148.233.217) -- Friday, December 19 2003, 05:06 pm

Ems, Tarna & A'mous....
Thank you all for your feed back...your response means so much....your comments carry more than my words ever possibly could...thank you for taking the time to read & comment...Terrie*

Keyonna (138.88.117.234) -- Sunday, December 21 2003, 02:07 am

I loved It
This was beautiful and I mean you captured the feeling well. Great work and thanks for sharing.

Terrie* (65.148.210.122) -- Sunday, December 21 2003, 05:01 am

Thank you Keyonna...
'aye i just love your name...it's such a Cool name....does it have a significant meaning to it?

thank you for such a sweet comment...yeap, love does that to people...my husband left a big foot print in my heart...glad ya liked it...Terrie*

sweetvenom (61.1.201.128) -- Sunday, December 21 2003, 07:27 pm

hhhhhmmmm seems you ve felt it
Hey terrie,
The poem was really touching.There was an excellent use of words and the emotions were clearly pointed out.
Nice work.

Terrie* (65.150.167.113) -- Wednesday, December 24 2003, 08:27 pm

Sweetvenom
thank you for such a high charge comment..coming form you makes my day i have read your work and i truely enjoy reading your poetry just as well..thanx 'gain MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! Terrie*

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