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Love Gave Me A Chance The First Time
25 August, 2003
Author: Terrie*

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woke up today
still crying within,
my babe' no longer exists.
his horizon is in the depth...

my one and only..
has departed from this earth.
in another life he appears...

no more pain will he see...
tears capture the best of me..
first man that i fell deeply in love with,
different realm he belongs...

i feel his presence , i feel strong...
i miss his tender touch...
i may seem brave, but i miss him so much....

i am so fragile and heart broken..
i miss his voice ,i wont hear...
he is no where near...

love no longer spoken...
in my heart...
since he carried it off to another realm ....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

John Foster (62.254.51.227) -- Tuesday, September 2 2003, 06:25 pm

very good

This poem is written from the heart........Fond memories will never fade........
Terrie* (65.148.213.79) -- Tuesday, September 2 2003, 11:49 pm

chance...

John, thank you for your comment..as i'm stepping ground out into the world...so are my poems...and that is absolutely true....FOND MEMORIES WILL NEVER FADE...thank you once again.. Terrie*
 
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