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Hearts Desire
20 July, 2003
Author: Terrie*

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i feel warmth,
i feel comfort,
i feel love,i feel safe,
i feel you by my side...
i don't hurt,
i don't cry,i don't worry,
i feel you by my side...

i feel hugs,
i feel kisses,i feel protected,
i feel the embrace of your soft whisper...
i feel your hand next to mine.

i know you no longer exist...
but my heart totally insists...
i'm hypnotized....
i feel those soft lips..up against mine...
& that body keeping me warm late at night.
i feel that heart pounding, next to mine...
i hear you moan,...
i wake up...i break out in tears..
i find my self very much alone...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

John (62.254.51.227) -- Friday, September 12 2003, 08:24 pm

Very true

His spirit is always there.......you will never be alone.......
Terrie* (65.141.106.20) -- Saturday, September 13 2003, 12:11 am

TOUCHED

John, i honestly believe his spirit is...... among the kids and i.....i think on my strengths that have surfaced, where at one time i seemed weak ..he presents himself and gives me that lil budge...as a reminder...thanx..
kayz (192.168.3.252) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 02:13 pm

.........

i dont really understand. its an amazing poem but is it about a person or a spirit greater than that? great writing
Terrie* (65.150.170.5) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 04:38 pm

Kayz, confused you ?

allow mr to clarify it for you sweetie...this is about a persons spirit , to be precise..it is about the spirit of a loved one...that is trying to find a place to rest..as it turns out i haven't given him the chance...as he attempts to leave , it seems i always bring him righhhhhht back...
thank you for your lovely comment....
 
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