First Love
19 August, 2003
Author: Terrie*
you took my breath away,
I fell in love on the spot
You made my heart dance,
Faithfully after 7 years,
as promised, you re-appear
With you my life is so complete,
Your love swept me off my feet
With the innocence in your heart,
That surfaced from the start
No love can compare the passion we share.
You are my destiny & my life,
I am proud to become your wife.
------- Author's Notes -------
"i was 13 yrs. old when i meet my husband,he was in the navy and a good buddy to one of my 6 brothers...( i was raised w/7 fathers)i never gave him a second look..(i was just a kid....)he told my sister-in-law , to tell me that he was returning in 7 years...indeed he did and believe me i saw him in a different way......" married him 2 years after his return... |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Martin Vann (171.75.220.142) -- Tuesday, August 26 2003, 02:34 pm Terrie, You have had and I'm sure, are having aninteresting life. Thought is read like a fairy-tale, he did come back! Good for you. Will Berry peened a poem called, An Old Lion's Last Roar, I thought it was very good. Have you read it? Regards, MartinV |
| Terrie* (65.150.174.151) -- Wednesday, August 27 2003, 05:25 am Martin, yeap.... i have had/continue to have a very... interesting blessed life. i was.... glad he came back..i never thought he was serious when he said he would wait....those 7 yrs. for me...i was very thankful that he returned safely... thank you for your comment... i haven't read the poem by Will Berry... i will as soon as i send this off to you...God Bless..Terrie* |
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