In The Eyes Of A Child by Terrie*

i did something different today
i lived life... thru the eyes of a child
i did it all... in one day
the experience was so cool..and wild
close yours and follow me...what a surprise
look, take my hand, come share with me
can you feel?... can you see?
visualize a sweet everlasting sunrise

see how it leads us towards the sky?
wow... can you believe?
this is the life we all have to leave
we giggled we laughed..what a high

not a worry in sight, i love it sooo
isn't this great? nothing to hide
forgot what it was like...a comfort zone
take a deep breath, hearts feeling the rush, feel the memories inside?

feel that warm sun and breeze brush against your face?
the thrill to relive this again...absolute no regret...
the emotions attached to this time and place
if only for a moment ......be thankful,
then experience a breathtaking unforgetful sunset

eve hall (205.188.208.136) -- Wednesday, August 20 2003, 01:20 am

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One of the best poems I have read in a long time.
Keep pen in hand, bravo!!!

Terrie* (65.135.86.91) -- Thursday, August 21 2003, 03:49 am

Thank You...
Eve, i am glad that you enjoyed this...i have read your poems in the past. i think they are fantastic, such a great honor to be praised and commented by a poet that has many honors..awhile back i shared some of my work w/one of my patients..a well known poet...he encouraged me to share what i had. then a good friend directed me to this great site.there are alot of talented individuals on this site...thanx for your encouragement...Terrie*

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