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Escape
12 July, 2003
Author: Terrie*

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Your words are mystical that do not cease...
in a song or a poem they're truely divine...
They bring us to our knees.
There's a great escape in every line.

they melt our hearts.
a soul able to feel, the emotions of anothers soul torn apart.
Every word in light.
Great detail and height.

Your words have wings that spread comfort
Inspiring as the gospel that offers support.
your words have arms, that hug so tight
you touch so many lives in what you do
proud to say you touched mine too

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Friday, July 18 2003, 04:51 pm

Wings that spread comfort......

Wow, Terrie! This is a big poem. I really like it, it is very inspiring. It is also very "spiraling" poetry! Thanks!
Terrie (65.136.7.162) -- Friday, July 18 2003, 06:23 pm

T.Y

Thanks Ben...Do ya recognize it? i revised it before i authorized it for publication...Glad ya like it...
marty henry (206.158.10.6) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 05:49 pm

A double (wow wow)

Your work is like a beautiful painting on our wall.
The words you write have touched us all.
I thank you once again for the writing of your pen.
Works of art.I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

GOD BLEES

Marty Henry
Terrie* (65.136.6.115) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 07:15 pm

Marty...

your comments are far above my poem (i'm blushing)
thank you , they mean a great deal to me...glad you enjoy them...God Bless You!! Terrie
 
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