#1 Ace by Terrie*

i woke up feeling so empty inside..
feelings i couldn't hide.
i about cried my eyes out,
my heart wants to shout.

i am in so much pain,
i think i'm going insane..
i cannot picture your face,
all i get is an empty space

we made a promise, it was not kept.
. numerous days i haven't slept
my life has become bitter and cold,
together we were to grow gray & old.

i only have memories you left behind
so vividly they come to mind.
i hang on to you shirt at night
your scent still so fresh,
i hug it so very tight

i tried to move on but my heart won,
your my # 1 ACE darling, your so hard to replace

tzuhsi (205.188.208.42) -- Wednesday, September 3 2003, 05:05 pm

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WOW I really liked this. I can feel exactly what you feel. Its really really good

Ben (67.123.245.73) -- Wednesday, September 3 2003, 07:52 pm

Good job, Terrie, on your
Good job ,Terrie, on your expression of a one-of-a-kind love! I enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work!

Terrie* (65.136.7.48) -- Thursday, September 4 2003, 08:09 pm

ahhh chux...
TZ & Ben. do ya know how much power there is in a kind jesture? big roaring mighty power!... thank you ...don't worry my head hasn't swelled up or spun off yet :) it is always such an honor when someone pays a special comment on my ameatur writing
...thanx....Terrie

barb (66.46.241.11) -- Friday, September 5 2003, 06:24 pm

good
What makes your your poems so nice is that they are from everyday feelings. love reading your feelings thanx for sharing your heart

Terrie* (65.136.6.32) -- Saturday, September 6 2003, 02:11 am

appreciate your comments.........
Barb, thanx for you feed-back...it is always encouraging to have some one comment something positive..thank you..Terrie*

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