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Embryo
2 July, 2003
Author: Terrie*

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yesterday i was just an embryo,
my heart so naive,timid & weak
i met DOC
my universe, my rock

i was under his spell
i was so in love couldn't you tell?
now my heart's in dispair
why is life cruel & unfair?

i dropped to my knees
GOD i'm begging you please
we have our whole lifes to share
i only walked out to say a prayer

the love & life that i knew
please don't take him with you
he gave me a last kiss, sent me on my way
my life he molded and shaped
i wish to forever forget that day
that he was coded and draped

i had to let go
the man whom helped me grow
i am now just an embryo...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Saturday, July 5 2003, 10:32 pm

Go, Terrie, go!

It's funny how the older we grow, that we truly realise just how little we know!! Thank you from another "Embryo"!!
Terrie (65.148.210.53) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 07:06 am

:)

ain't that the truth...i'm still learning something new each day...thanx for commenting Ben.....
joyce ivy (68.222.91.124) -- Saturday, December 11 2004, 07:08 pm

Tearful Read

I feel you pain from death..it's hard when you see them pull that sheet over their head...this was a very tearful read Terrie...brought back the memories of my mother and grandmother...I share your pain...thanks for sharing your poetry...
you friend ...
Joyce
 
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