Missing You Forever And A Day by Terrie*

i just dropped by to say,
hope everything is okay.
i know it has been awhile,
since i last saw your sweet smile.

i also wanted to take this time,
to let you know that i too am fine.
plus i wanted to be the first to say,
i miss you a little bit more with each passing day.

many times when i felt alone,
i longed to hear your voice on the phone.
for now i know that can not be,
therefore i send these few lines from me.

i will love you till the days are gone
and life moves on.
i appreciate you more and more each day,
that you are away.

it won't be far too long,
you'll return to my arms where you belong.
until then.. close your eyes...
envision me by your side... where i want to be...
captured into your loving embrace...

luc (68.74.149.241) -- Monday, July 7 2003, 01:39 am

no title
the tittle with the poem sort of .. hmm.. dont mix. like the poem, to me anyways, sounded like well.. forever you'll be missing them.. but then towards the last stanza and the last one it pretty much said you'll only miss "him" untill "he" comes back. dunno im picky/delecate like that.. but i still liked the poem. dont get me wrong. i give it a high 8 out of a 10. :)

Terrie (65.136.7.2) -- Monday, July 7 2003, 04:57 pm

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Luc, i guess i had plenty of folks trying to figure this one out..anyways when i wrote this poem..i was visiting my husband @ the cemetary on his one year anniversary & our 13th wedding anniversay,yup... ya got it... i burried him on our 12th (life thru us a bad curve) i captured the emotions that i was feeling @ the time, to me the title was appropriate..towards the end when we are once again reunited "forever" turns to "a day" does that clarify
my unusual way of phrasing something? thanks for commenting...Terrie

John (62.254.51.227) -- Monday, July 14 2003, 10:49 pm

expressive
Well Terrie, all good poets just write as they feel..Readers may not all have the same view......some will relate, and some see a different perspective.......I thought it was moving...

Terrie (65.148.231.47) -- Tuesday, July 15 2003, 04:36 pm

appreciate ......
John ,your comment was very much appreciated, thank you for the positive feed back and for taking the time to read it.

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