Mental Help
19 October, 2002
Author: Tiffany
The mental anxiety attacks are happening again.
Her state of mind is not just right.
She craves for that attention with certain limitations.
Looking around for the oh so kind people.
She finds herself fading in and out.
While lying on there crumbly couch.
The mentalness is making her sick.
She seems to be having a mental breakdown.
She awakes and finds them there.
"Does anyone care"?
she hears herself saying.
"I need that attention with certain limitation".
They come to her and she starts to moan.
While shoving pills down her throat,
she fights but no hope.
For she is suffering from the mental illness.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Pamela (142.59.47.96) -- Sunday, October 20 2002, 05:52 pm This poem could have so many different levels of interpretation - I personally took it as one of love. The line "she craves that attention with certain limitation..." is an excellent example of the juxtaposition we put ourselves in everyday. |
| barb (206.191.91.77) -- Sunday, October 20 2002, 10:09 pm I'm not that bright what does juxtaposition mean.Tiffany down to earth writing very good |
| Luc (67.37.181.156) -- Sunday, October 20 2002, 11:03 pm oooh me likes. |
| Pamela (205.206.128.10) -- Monday, October 21 2002, 02:01 am Juxtaposition means two opposing ideas or subjects that create a sense of discomfort. You know when you look at someone or read something and it doesn't seem right? Well, for me that particular line created a feeling of oddness. But definitely good oddness. <B>J. </B> (209.214.52.140) |
| barb (206.191.91.51) -- Monday, October 21 2002, 07:36 pm thank-you for explaining |
| Tiffany (68.10.181.250) -- Wednesday, October 23 2002, 08:49 pm Thank you barb,Luc,Pamela,and J., I thought it was kinda korny. But thats just me anywayz i just wrote to say thank you. Oh and Barb don't feel bad because i didn't know what juxtaposition meant either in fact i had to go and look it up. L.O.L! Plus thank you pamela for explaining what it meant. Anywayz thanks for the comments wasn't expecting that. |
| mental (66.153.165.47) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 05:08 am hey i'm here mental!!!! oh that's the name of the poem lol. good poem insights plus it has my name in it lol. |
| Tiffany (216.54.14.84) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 03:09 pm hey mental wuz up? anyways every poem of mine you seemed to like is that good or bad? anyways thanks for submiting a another comment. O it is kinda funny cuz your name is mental L.O.L!! No it wasn't refering to you! L.O.L anywayz sorry for this long thank you comment! |
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