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Pain
9 July, 2003
Author: Bench

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I can feel your pain.
Read it in your eyes,
They speak too much!
You drown it in laughter
But you are not killing it.
Instead you are losing
Your spirit, your life.
The pain is consuming
It burns out the zest
Within you!

And yet you suffer in silence!
Trying to be a strong person
Proving to the world
That you are stronger

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie (65.148.210.53) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 05:48 am

heavy & deep

i enjoyed your poem it speaks boldly...
great writing...
daisy (205.188.209.40) -- Friday, July 18 2003, 02:58 am

kool

i know what ur saying but noone can tell that i am in pain cuz i can act really good. and yes everyone that has pain suffer in slince
bench (192.168.0.79) -- Friday, July 18 2003, 05:26 am

Thanks

Terrie and daisy:

Thanks for the kind comments. :)
 
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