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Look What You Did
11 April, 2004
Author: Torrey

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Why do you do this
You make me so insane
You have broken my heart
And made me feel so much pain

I loved you with all my heart
And i thought you knew
But yet you still made me cry
and made me feel so blue

Why cant you see
why are you so blind
this girl you think you want
is only in your mind

Now look wht you did
All i want to do is die
you broke my heart in pieces
Then you made me cry

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Clive (63.184.1.216, 2) -- Monday, April 12 2004, 05:46 pm

"In an Instant"

For me it was a girl who did not see my love,
She took the best of me, and the rest.
Cry I thought I'd never stop.
Good poem if from experiance I'm sorry
XX (24.30.69.173) -- Thursday, April 15 2004, 10:30 pm

Cool

Like the rhyme
 
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