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Life Or Death
11 December, 2003
Author: Tzuhsi

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Blood dripping
Soul slipping
Into the dark
Until I am nothing

Clouds in the sky
Tears in my eyes
Rain falling
I want to die

Angels crying
I'm tired of trying
It is time to quit
All my lying

Sit here and sigh
Thinking of ways to die
Should I give in
Or give life one more try

The time has come
The decision is done
I thought I would be scared
When I fired the gun

Lying on the floor
Alive no more
Cold to the touch
Cold to the core

Buried in the ground
Nothing around
I got out
Of this hellish town

No one cared
No one dared
Ever try to help
The pain I bared

Don't cry now
Don't ask why
Don't ask how

You should have cared before
It is too late now
My life is no more

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mental (66.153.164.147) -- Saturday, December 13 2003, 12:13 am

very tense

another excellent poem keep going i contacted dreamer about your request i hope she contacts you.
 
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