Command
19 November, 2003
Author: Tzuhsi
Everything is empty
Nothing inside
Can anyone help me
I don't want to die
You want to send my away
Because I cut myself
I don't want to go
I want to stay
When I cut I find fulfilment
And you call this foolishness
You hace to understand
When I hold this knife in my hand
I am finally in command
No one to tell me yes or no
Just me
My knife
And the endless blood flow
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| mental (66.153.164.114) -- Friday, November 21 2003, 06:36 am oh yes keep it going very nice writing |
| Sarah A (82.35.74.99) -- Sunday, November 23 2003, 09:23 pm i read your poems and i want to sit and cry. theres so much pain in what you write. you dont need to feel this way. there are so many people out there who are available to help. i know that one way for you to get it off your chest is through poetry, but there are also people who you can talk to. i'm around if you want a shoulder to cry on... |
| tzuhsi (205.188.209.39) -- Wednesday, November 26 2003, 04:21 pm thanks sarah a i reall appreciate that you would be willing to be there. you would be suprised at the number of people who run because they have no idea what to say or do. thanks again guys for reading and giving such nice coments to my poetry. i thank you so much |
| blade (168.221.27.195) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 08:17 pm love it!!!! my favorite is the last couple lines!!! |
| dark3nstar (4.239.234.203) -- Monday, April 11 2005, 10:56 pm very good poem... i was sent to a group home b/c i was cutting too much... dont let it go too far .. you really dont want to be sent away...keep your head up |
| Korie (68.221.239.63) -- Saturday, October 1 2005, 03:48 am i've read alot of your poems on here and i just have to say you are soo great i love them all, i understand you very much i myself cut ...keep up the good words |
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