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Sweet Suicide
17 September, 2003
Author: Tzuhsi

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How sweet it would be
If I could be free
From all the pain
Inside of me
I hate the life I'm in
There is no beginning
No end
No matter how hard I try
Numerous times I did cry
I sit here and sigh
With no more pride
I take the blade one more time
Jab it in to help me find
My end
Sweet suicide

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Comments on this poem/writing:

ym (207.190.93.140) -- Saturday, September 20 2003, 10:54 pm

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The sweetness of how the words flowed together made this poem a sweet suicide. It was very good. Keep up the good work!
anonymous (143.105.8.12) -- Monday, September 22 2003, 11:03 pm

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i luv the way your poem is expressed! if it has anything to do with your reality though i hope u feel better and i hope u will come to realize, hurting yourself isn't the way to solve anything! Though i don't know u i can say that u are much smarter, braver, and stronger thatn that!
tzuhsi (152.163.252.162) -- Tuesday, September 30 2003, 02:52 pm

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THANKS!!
 
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