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Crimson Rain
5 September, 2003
Author: Tzuhsi

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Blade in hand
Tight clenched fist
Shaking and trembling
For I know I need this

Make one long cut
Below my elbow
Open it up
And watch the blood flow

Crimson rivers hit the floor
Streaming out slowly
Leaves me begging for more

I make a sencond cut
Then one after another
I keep going
Until I feel no other

My body is numb
I feel no pain
Tears start flowing
A Crimson rain

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Wednesday, September 17 2003, 06:33 am

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I tried to burn my arm once with a candle but it only hurt more....help yourself cuz you can
kahla (216.67.209.16) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 12:29 am

nice

i love that poem i relate to it alot
frogiilover325 (68.221.227.101) -- Wednesday, August 4 2004, 12:27 am

talk

i really enjoy all of your poems and i was really hoping that me and you could talk. i was also hoping that i could use your poem to put in mine poem book!
 
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