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Closure
30 May, 2003
Author: Very Shy

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I think of all the times
I took you for granted
and all the things left unsaid...

I remember the passion
frantic clasping of bodies
bridging the gaps between or souls.

I sometimes yearn for the past
but I cannot compete
with myriad insecurities
and the inability to communicate.

With no regrets I move on
hoping that you'll read this some day...
and maybe find some closure.

I know that its tough...
but I tried and had to let go
though you still do touch me
deeper than any.

I will miss you
May the sun always shine on your path.
bye

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (205.188.209.71) -- Wednesday, June 4 2003, 07:19 am

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made me feel something inside that made me feel like i wanted to cry....great writing...
nila (195.93.33.14) -- Sunday, September 12 2004, 03:35 am

ohhh my god!!

i am speachless,and almost in tears,i felt every emotion,what a sad sad poem,
 
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