Heaven's Whisper by Keith

As I lay here
With my time drawing near
Heaven's gates are whispering
That I should no longer fear
They tell me that it's perfect
That no one ever cries
There is no more suffering
No more tears or empty lies
Come to this Eden
Come into the warming sun
Let your days be infinite
You no longer have to run
Come to this paradise
Walk down its golden road
No more hardships of the living
Your perfect world is ready to unfold
Let go of the life
You struggle to maintain
It's your time to come
To a world without pain
Do not be afraid
For I will be your guide
I never have abandoned you
For I have always been inside
Here, take my hand,
Let me take you to My place
It's time to let go
And come into my warm embrace

The sun is slowly setting
I feel my eyes begin to close
I smile for I am ready
And no longer do I oppose
As I shut my weary eyes
Angels come into view
They are smiling with outstretched arms
And I know I'm finally through
Their loving arms caress my face
They gently pull me to the sky
Higher and higher we float
To the heavens up on high
I see her smiling face
The pain no longer in her eyes
She smiles that brilliant smile
And my heart begins to rise
Her kiss is soft, and full of love
Consuming everything within
She tells me how proud she is
That I did not give in
She whispers two words
Words I thought I'd never hear
With her angelic voice she says
Together Forever as I cry one last tear

Tammy (66.38.5.159) -- Friday, April 16 2004, 06:22 am

Keith
"Heaven's whisper", WOW what can I say i'm speechless.
How beautiful this poem is....truely a very beautiful piece!!!!!

Stacey (68.82.127.61) -- Friday, April 16 2004, 09:39 am

blown away
I definitely agree with Tammy, this poem is absolutely beautiful from the beginning till the end! Looking forward to reading more of your work.

LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Friday, April 16 2004, 03:34 pm

''''''
Beautiful. My friend just passed away so obviously this touched me. Beautiful.

Meridian (152.163.252.196) -- Friday, April 16 2004, 04:27 pm

Very deep
I'm sorry to hear about your loss Keith, but very good writing! I mean you bring somebody to tears with this one! Keep writing Keith!

Meridian

barb (209.112.24.92) -- Friday, April 16 2004, 04:50 pm

keith
I just want to say what everybody else has said this is beautiful thank -you for making me feel peaceful good very good.

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