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You Are My Inspiration
25 March, 2004
Author: Whitfield

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You are my one and only
You are the love of my life
I am sorry for the things
I should and should not do

I do these thing because im afraid
Afraid you will not love me
Afraid you will leave me
For I am nothing
Without you by my side

This is just a message
To remind you
And to tell you
I will love forever
Until the end of time

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.206) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 03:26 am

Awwww

Whitfield! This is truly a kind poem to dedicate to the girl of your dreams! Lovely!
Barb (209.112.22.69) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 04:45 am

awww 2

I agree this is a touching dedication.
whitfield (unknown) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 01:59 pm

thank you

thank you for the comments they really mean alot to me
unknown to them (195.99.240.145) -- Thursday, April 1 2004, 03:08 pm

you are poetic

this poem is really amazing the person you wrote this for must be really greatful they must be lucky to have you!
whitfield (unknown) -- Monday, April 19 2004, 09:09 am

thanx

thank you. i was thinking of my girlfriend at the time
pandora (82.34.12.7) -- Thursday, March 17 2005, 01:40 pm

very sweet

so you met the love of your life and your only 18 thats funny it's a good poem and maybe you were blinded by love i dont know thats down to you i just find it hard to believe that you can feel that stong for someone at such a young age you need to live a little thats what you told me but it's still good
pandora(kel)-x-
carla (193.60.218.253) -- Tuesday, December 13 2005, 06:39 pm

aww hunny

i cant believe you can be so sweet aswel as obviously sexy. your sooo lovely babe
 
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