Feelings Not So Forgotten by Whitfield

I rest my lonely head
On my cold dark pillow
Staring at the place
Where you ounce rest

Trying to remember the past
Trying to forget my future

These scars are all mental
But slowly creeping onto my body

You say your spark has gone
Yet mine still keeps burning
Like a raging inferno
Running all over my body
Flowing through my veins
Taking control
Of a cold dead body
Which you used to love

anonymous (205.188.209.102) -- Tuesday, March 16 2004, 07:22 pm

The Towering Inferno!
That movie I've typed under the "comment title" was awesome! "Feelings Not So Forgotten" is a wonderful poem!

Meridian (205.188.209.102) -- Tuesday, March 16 2004, 07:23 pm

Forgot my name
Sorry Whitfield. I clicked "post your comment" so fast that I forgot to type my identity.

pandora (82.34.12.7) -- Thursday, March 17 2005, 01:55 pm

deep
it's deep and dark i really like this one it's one of the best you have done it's morbid and cold and full of pain it makes me want to hug you and tell you it's ok very good indeed
pandora(kel)-x-

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