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Next Time
2 March, 2004
Author: Whitfield

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Next time I will listen,
I’ve said this a thousand times,
When you offer me the help I need,
To cure me deep inside.

I blame myself for all your pain,
Even tough you beg me not to.
For I know deep inside,
I am the one to blame.

I beg you not to care,
When a new wound appears on my body.
Next time it will be different,
You’ll see….
You’ll see….

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Comments on this poem/writing:

jennifer (195.99.240.145) -- Monday, March 22 2004, 06:05 pm

pain

whitfield your poems are of a fantastic standard that are so impressive perhaps you should seriusly thinbk about likeing them yourself!!!
whitfield (unknown) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 02:02 pm

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thank you jennifer.
pandora (82.34.12.7) -- Thursday, March 17 2005, 02:03 pm

your fall of pain

i like the way you let your feeling be know and the way you let them show and the way you word it i still think you need a big hug hehe
pandora(kel)-x-
 
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