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Reality
10 January, 2004
Author: Whitfield

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Where is it?
what is it?
I never seem to be there,
except when im with you
then i can sense reality.

I feel it.....

I taste it....

I love it.....

Now i found reality,
do i lose it when your not near?
It feels that way,
when your not near i feel....

I feel lost....

I feel lonely....

If i could sum "reality" up in one word,
it would be .......you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

XoForeverXo (24.75.7.209) -- Sunday, March 14 2004, 07:02 am

!!!

WOW i love the ending of this poem!!! wow amazing!
whitfield (unknown) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 02:04 pm

.....

thank you im glad you like it
 
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