Found Yourself Down Another by Xeracy

That girl isn't playing games with you.
She's already kicked your ass.
When you stop and give it more thought,
You'll realize you are no more.
You never were.
You never will.
Don't worry, your about to find yourself.
Lost somewhere you never were.
Found someplace you never are.
Keep searching, you'll find it soon.
Girls don't like you,
But then again,
Who does?
Your ugly.
You can't talk right.
Out of date clothes.
Cliche personality.
You'll never know you.
I'll give you a hint.
Your dark and empty.
Just like that bottle
Your looking down.
See yourself yet?
Your at the bottom of it.
And you can't get back up,
But...
You can go down another

barb (66.46.230.40) -- Wednesday, December 18 2002, 09:33 pm

sensing
I sense that you don't like yourself.I found it doesn't matter what we wear or look like. If we treat others fairly and with love we get that back and people think we are beautiful even if we think we're not so if you really want to be handsome or beautiful be nice to others. it works I'm just average looking but people think I'm beautiful and that's uplifting.

Capricorn (62.31.144.1) -- Thursday, December 19 2002, 11:15 am

True
Yes, Barb's right, it's how you are and treat people that count,but too many people are taken in by appearances.Or are you saying in th poem that it's `the bottle' that's taking away the true self? Too many people use drink as a crutch in their life!

Xeracy (204.113.161.186) -- Thursday, December 19 2002, 08:35 pm

look over there...
Check out the "comments about poems" section of the forum.

superkiss (204.113.161.186) -- Friday, December 20 2002, 07:49 pm

enjoyable
i personally like all of your poems expecially this one its comeing from your heart and if its what you know to be true or how you truely feel you did a great job and i enjoyed it. ;)

Xeracy (64.12.96.105) -- Saturday, December 28 2002, 08:19 am

Thanks superkiss. I hope my poems have helped you in some way.

skigh (205.127.77.146) -- Tuesday, February 4 2003, 10:29 pm

wow
i love this poem i think that this is my favorite one out of all of them. Was this about an ex-girlfriend?:(

Xeracy (204.113.161.185) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 04:54 pm

No this wasn't. It was about one of my friends ex-girlfriends... :)

barb (66.46.241.23) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 06:02 am

did I miss something
I don't understand all these comments and I think I misunderstood the poem sorry.

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