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So Long
28 December, 2001
Author: Xeracy

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It's been so long since I could meet you.
It's been so long since I could see you.
It's been so long since I could feel you.
And maybe it should stay that way.

But there is this feeling that I can't stop.
But there is this pain that I can't ignore.
But there is this gapping hole that I can't fill.
I just can't let you go away.

Because I messed up and betrayed you.
Because I messed up and didn't call you.
Because I messed up and I left you.
I really sorry It's this way.

I never meant to hurt you.
I never meant to leave you.
I never meant to love you,
If it was going to end up this way.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.36.186.58) -- Saturday, November 30 2002, 09:31 am

hmm nice

really liked the least stanza. 'i never ment to love you, it it was going to end up this way' bravo.
Xeracy (64.12.96.77) -- Saturday, December 28 2002, 08:25 am


Thanks. 8c)
you know who i am (64.158.64.103) -- Tuesday, February 4 2003, 02:39 am


But there is this feeling that I can't stop.
But there is this pain that I can't ignore.
But there is this gapping hole that I can't fill.
I just can't let you go away
you know who (64.158.64.103) -- Tuesday, February 4 2003, 02:40 am


I never meant to hurt you.
I never meant to leave you.
I never meant to love you,
If it was going to end up this way. hope you can forgive me one of these days
LinzAy (64.12.105.184) -- Tuesday, February 4 2003, 10:36 am

......

ow...i like that!!! thats good!
LinzAy (152.163.201.61) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 07:49 am

oops...

hehe.....ow=wow!
HeaTher (65.1.61.110) -- Thursday, June 2 2005, 02:27 pm

:)

good job...
Po-et-ic dreemer (174.253.179.153) -- Monday, September 19 2011, 06:01 am

Love bites

Very good poem Xeracy, the thought of loving someone or something can seem like a great idea and how a person hs made u feel while it's good and bad at the same time drives almost everyone crazy. That's the power of "change" when people want to change the person not the problem!
 
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