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You Didn't Deserve My Hell
21 August, 2003
Author: Your Melody

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You didn't deserve it,
You never did
I pushed to hard
and you couldn't hold on
The four years between us
was too much to handle
My mom put you through a whole lot of hell
but I can't keep hiding behind these walls she tries to build up
I gotta start taking responsibility for my own actions
I gotta start by saying I'm sorry
because you didn't deserve it
You never did

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Terrie* (65.136.7.115) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 03:27 am

sorry.....

Mel, this was very expressive..i hope things are better..parents sometimes can be overly controlling...i'm a parent a single parent at that and i know single parents can be obnoxious huh? well i hope.. i'm not ,and if i am i hope i cease it. my daughter and son are 21 & 23 yr.old, college students
and still living at home w/me..maybe i better find out huh?thanx for sharing your insight feelings.Terrie*
 
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